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Posted: Nov 20, 2012, 12:36 PM
Feedback Needed - New 2D Cartoon
Greetings to all. We're looking for feedback on a promo for a cartoon we plan to promote through various means. Let us know what you think about the premise, animation, overall production, etc. http://areyouamoron.net/at/YMPromoComp.html Trust me, you won't hurt any feelings, so please be honest. Thanks! #54
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Posted: Nov 21, 2012, 1:49 AM
I actually enjoyed it, the drawing could use some work, but it works fine if you want to use that as your style, the humor is great and that carries the whole show (like south park)
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Posted: Nov 23, 2012, 11:31 AM
Thanks blackspittle! Your feedback is definitely encouraging, especially regarding the humor. Anyone else, feel free to let us know what you think. #54
Apprentice
Posted: Nov 23, 2012, 7:44 PM
I agree with the other feedback, the characters could move more so the animation is less sloppy. The humor is also great I enjoyed it.